Its hard to say this isn't a commercial tune, it could've been a commercial tune in the 70's-80's, but sadly its out of date. It lacks the oomph if you get what I mean. Nice productive tune.
Im sorry to say, but I didn't like the song. Im a full on electronic music fan, but this song in my opinion has too many synths which sounds like a crying baby. I think the lead synth should thay the same, but the rest of the synths should be lowered a few octaves. The bass could have a little more rhythm to it.
Im a producing artist so I know what its like, its all about trial and error, if you try what I said this song may go up in rank.
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